Changing narrative ideas

Originally our narratiive was about a teacher who got abused in school when he was young, so he became a teacher so he could also abuse children from his class as he wanted revenge. So there was going to be who was going to be his target. We then changed our narrative to where a boy walks into his classroom where he got abused and he remembers his past times in that classroom. The camera would then zoom into his eyes which would zoom out as him being a teacher, so he would not actually be in the classroom but would be day dreaming, when he comes out of his dream he shouts at his class in frustration. There is my blog post which shows the pictures I took when we were testing whetehr or not this concept would work. However when we came to editing the sequences we were not happy with the concept because it was a bit confusing. so we changed our narrative all over to something completely different. Our new and final treatment of the opening film sequence is about a girl who gets kidnapped by an anonymous person who will not be shown in the opening sequence. The girl will be tied to a chair in a basement where she will have been hurt and abused. Throughout the sequence of her in the basement there are going to be flashbacks of what she did earlier on in the day like getting ready for school and walking to school.

These are the pictures I took when we were test filming our second idea.
http://sara2asmedia.blogspot.com/2011/03/recording-film-scene.html